Review of THE CHILDREN OF GREEN KNOWE

Boston, L.M. 1955. THE CHILDREN OF GREEN KNOWE. New York: Harcourt, Inc. ISBN 0-15-202468-9

Toseland must go to live with his great-grandmother, Mrs. Oldknow, for the winter break from school. Though they have never met, it is obvious they immediately get along and are glad to have each other. On their first encounter, Mrs. Oldknow tells Tolly, “So you’ve come back!” she said, smiling, as he came forward, and he found himself leaning against her shoulder as if he knew her quite well.” Tolly has always been a bit of a loner—especially since his mother died. With no siblings, he is eager to find playmates. His innate sense of curiosity draws him into the mysterious happenings in his grandmother’s home and she patiently and lovingly encourages his exploration and discovery. This third-person omniscient narrative fantasy is a ghost story, though not in a typical sense. Rather than the reader and characters being afraid of the ghosts, we are all eager for them to show themselves. Mrs. Oldknow encourages the ghosts’ appearance by giving Tolly some of their belongings and telling stories of when they were alive. The identities of the ghosts is one of the most enjoyable discoveries of this novel, and thus shall not be divulged here. Boston uses formal speech and narrative to tell the story of a lonely child discovering the mysteries of his family’s manor. This manor is described in incredible detail—the smells of the stable, the topiary garden, the bedrooms and living rooms, and the many animals which roam about. Though a bit slow moving, the reader cannot help but “see” the story unfold through Boston’s descriptive writing style.

This story is recommended for readers grades 3-6.

Review of AL CAPONE DOES MY SHIRTS

Choldenko, Gennifer. 2004. AL CAPONE DOES MY SHIRTS. New York: G.P. Putnam’s Sons. ISBN 0-399-23861-1

AL CAPONE DOES MY SHIRTS is a collection of journal entries by Matthew “Moose” Flanagan. Moose’s life is not unlike that of a typical seventh grader—except that his older sister is autistic, his father is an electrician/prison guard, and he lives on Alcatraz Island. The characters’ traits unfold through a combination of dialog, action, and narrative. The family moved to Alcatraz to take advantage of an educational opportunity for his sister. Though he deeply resents the move, Moose, a self-proclaimed good boy, always does what he’s supposed to do and “tries very hard not to get angry with his sister.” Moose’s desire to have a “normal” family and do the right thing permeates everything he does. The island and its buildings and characteristics are explicitly described. The year is both included in the journal entries as well as alluded to in the title and text. Contemporary references to Al Capone, joblessness, and inkwells support the story’s 1930s era. The dialog and narrative are natural and flow easily—not at all encumbered by an author’s need to clarify the time period or force feed historical tidbits. The historical era and setting add to this story’s uniqueness and appeal. Even if the reader does not have a developmentally disabled family member, the target audience will empathize with the protagonist’s struggle to fit in socially and be a positive force within his family.

Selected as a Newbery Honor Book in 2005, this historical fiction novel is highly recommended for readers grades 5-9.

Review of STINK: THE INCREDIBLE SHRINKING KID

McDonald, Megan. Peter H. Reynolds. (Ill.) 2005. STINK: THE INCREDIBLE SHRINKING KID. Cambridge, MA: Candlewick Press. ISBN 0-7636-2025-4

James “Stink” Moody is a typical second grader. He is responsible, follows rules, loves our country’s 4th president, and likes doing homework. Ok. Maybe he’s not so typical. However, his relationship with his sister is—mostly. Though Stink and his sister Judy fight about things such as how best to care for the class newt, their arguments are more civil than some I’ve seen in real life. This comical story of a bossy big sister and powerless little brother is more easily enjoyed than would be a tale of a more realistic and querulous relationship. Stink and Judy’s sibling rivalry is dictated more by age than gender. McDonald and Reynolds work together to make a book which is appealing to newly independent readers. Through the use of large print, large margins and frequent illustrations this book is appealing to children who are unsure of their ability to tackle novels. In addition, each chapter concludes with a Stink-authored comic strip which is humorously connected to the chapter’s conflict. Though the plot begins slowly, humor fills the gaps until the story’s turning point. While the author’s commitment to the light-heartedness of the story lessens its verisimilitude, the target audience will enjoy Stink’s journey to discovering we all grow in our own time.

This contemporary realistic fiction novel, with its frequent comic-book style illustrations, is recommended for both read-alouds and independent readers in grades K-4.

Review of JOEY PIGZA SWALLOWED THE KEY

Gantos, Jack. 1998. JOEY PIGZA SWALLOWED THE KEY. New York: Farrar, Straus and Giroux. ISBN 0-374-33664-4

First in a series of four books, JOEY PIGZA SWALLOWED THE KEY is a telling and, at times, heartbreaking story of a fifth grader’s life with Attention Deficit/Hyperactivity Disorder. Gantos thrusts readers into the mind of Joey as he disrupts class, swallows a key, climbs the rafters of a barn, and worse. Adult readers will find themselves asking, “is that really what he’s thinking?” Gantos pushes the realism envelope as many of Joey’s situations teeter on the brink of implausibility. His support system, however, is helpful yet fallible and quite realistic. As Joey makes his way from one mishap to another and lands himself in the “big special-ed center,” the plot is consistently engaging and logical. The writing style creates a sense of non-stop thought and action by streaming together multiple phrases using “and” and “but.” These run on sentences give the reader a sense of what it is like inside a brain with ADHD. The setting is relatively nonspecific. The story takes place in a district with the resources to accommodate children like Joey. Joey’s story would be unlikely—or more tragic—were it to take place in a small school district with fewer resources.

This edgy piece of contemporary realistic fiction is recommended for mature readers grades 5-8 and adults seeking a new perspective on the subject of ADHD.

Review of SO B. IT

Weeks, Sarah. 2004. SO B. IT. New York: Laura Geringer Books. ISBN 0-06-623622-3

Bluebonnet award nominee SO B. IT offers believable characters going through real crises. Heidi, a strong-willed 12-year old girl, takes a trip across the country to discover her identity. Author Sarah Weeks’ commitment to realism is evident. Though strong-willed, Heidi does not forge boldly into the unknown, rather she steps out with timid determination. Through a likely series of events, Heidi’s uncertainty comes and goes in waves. Her bouts of strength and resolve come from her connection to her care-giver, Bernadette. Though she is not with Bernadette, frequent phone calls from the road serve as a lifeline for Heidi. Together they work to accomplish Heidi’s goal: discovering the meaning of “soof.” Weeks uses Heidi’s voice to tell the story. On her sojourn, Heidi makes lists of her observations, such as “What I know about mama” and “What I know about lying.” These lists give the reader a snapshot of Heidi’s thoughts and growth. The setting of SO B. IT is critical to the functionality of the story. The combination of Nevada, with legalized gambling, and Heidi’s lucky streak, provides a financial means to support Heidi’s journey. Also, being a young girl in America both facilitates as well as adds conflict to the plot. Though the Unites States is a fairly open and free society, there are rules about young people traveling alone. This scenario would be less plausible in a culture which is more restrictive, in particular toward females. The “tween” years are a time during which many search for their identity. This theme is sure to strike home for the target audience. SO B. IT also perceptively explores the lives and families of those with mental disabilities.

This contemporary realistic fiction is recommended for readers grades 5-8.

Review of CLEMENTINE

Pennypacker, Sara. Marla Frazee. (Ill.) 2006. CLEMENTINE. New York: Hyperion Books for Children. ISBN 0-7868-3882-5

In this first person account of a second grader’s life, the reader is taken on a stream-of-consciousness roller coaster ride. Sara Pennypacker strings together seemingly disconnected thoughts and, thus, creates a window into the mind of the title character, Clementine. This rambunctious, distractible, and impulsive girl is so believable, I got tired just reading about her. Clementine pays attention to the wrong things and helps by cutting her friend’s hair and drawing curls on her head with her mother’s special markers. This makes her, as her friend puts it, “the hard one.” Though believable, Clementine’s gender makes her an atypical protagonist. Most stories about difficult children are about boys rather than girls. Marla Frazee’s frequent monochromatic drawings shed additional light on Clementine’s personality. The reader sees her spiky hair after she has cut it off and her sad expression when her mother sees her. The frequency of the pictures, about every other page, also serves to aid readers in their transition to longer novels. Though the book is more than 100 pages, the regularity of the illustrations helps to break up the text and make it less intimidating for recent ‘early reader’ graduates. Though many different things happen, Pennypacker pulls them all together into a cohesive and engaging plot. Why is Clementine at the principal’s office? How will they get rid of the pigeons? What will Clementine do next? This story’s themes of childhood insecurity and unconditional parental love are universal and timeless.

This fast paced contemporary realistic fiction novel, with its comical and telling illustrations, is highly recommended for readers grades 2-5.

Review of POEMS TO DREAM TOGETHER=POEMAS PARA SOÑAR JUNTOS

Alarcón, Francisco X. Paula Barragán. (Ill.) 2005. POEMS TO DREAM TOGETHER=POEMAS PARA SOÑAR JUNTOS. New York: Lee & Low Books Inc. ISBN 1-58430-233-X

This individual poet compilation “celebrates the connections children share with their families, communities, and all living things.” In the book’s preface, Alarcón relates that he grew up in California and Mexico, thus explaining why he wrote the poems in both Spanish and English. The fact that the author himself wrote each piece in both languages, gives lingual authenticity to the poetry. Creating a dual language collection of poetry likely necessitated Alarcón’s use of narrative and free verse styles. These poems range from mildly esoteric to easily accessible. In Waking Dream, Alarcón reflects, “when I dream I’m dreaming I’m about to wake up.” Adobes is a more concrete poem about homes. “Adobe bricks that townsfolk made from mud and straw and spread to dry out in the sun like some really big chocolate bars….” While elements such as rhyme, alliteration, and onomatopoeia are not employed; this collection is teeming with imagery, emotion, personification and eloquent language use. My favorite poem in this collection is In My Dreams. Alarcón tells of his dream of a harmonious Earth wherein “buffaloes roam free,” “there is no word for ‘war’,” and “all living beings come together as one big family.” However, Dreamer of the Fields ~to César Chávez would be enhanced by the inclusion of an author’s note providing background information on the revolutionary activist.

This dual language poetry collection is adorned with bright illustrations using pencil, cut paper, and gouache and is recommended for poetry enthusiasts ages 4-10.

Review of NOAH’S ARK

Janisch, Heinz. Lisbeth Zwerger (Ill.) 1997. NOAH’S ARK. New York: North-South Books, Inc. ISBN 0-329-23633-4

Translated from the original Swiss, author Heinz Janisch’s adaptation of this classic biblical story combines an age-old text with modern illustrations. This juxtaposition facilitates the sharing of NOAH’S ARK in a secular setting. While the biblical phraseology is evident in “he was righteous” and “God had commanded” and “washed the earth clean,” the text is no less accessible to a variety readers. However, this juxtaposition also takes away from the story’s meaning. As someone who is familiar with the story, my focus was drawn to Zwerger’s illustrations. The detailed and realistic illustrations of paired animals are presented in the form of Tables and Figures, much like one would see in an academic diagram. However, the people in the pictures are less accurately represented. The 1960s-clad Noah and his family have disproportionate bodies. In addition, each looks more Swiss in appearance than Turkish—which is historically the more likely culture of Noah’s family. Though this projection of one’s own culture onto biblical characters is common, it is ethnocentrism just the same. These cultural and historical inaccuracies may prove confusing for younger audiences.

If you are in the market for a 'Noah story' that will Wow! you, this probably won’t fit the bill. The illustrations make the target audience a bit older than may be expected for a picture book. Recommended for one-on-one or independent reading for children ages 9-12 years.

Review of BEST BEST COLORS

Hoffman, Eric and Celeste Henriquez (Ill.). 1999. BEST BEST COLORS. St. Paul, MN : Redleaf Press. ISBN 9-7818-8483-469-1

PLOT SUMMARY
Nate struggles to decide which color is his “best, best.” Along the way, he chooses a favorite mamma—first one, then the other, then neither. When he cannot decide who his best friend is, he wonders, “Do I have to pick just one?” Finally, after making a rainbow flag with his mammas, Nate realizes he doesn’t have to choose just one. They can all be his “best, best.”

CRITICAL ANALYSIS (INCLUDING CULTURAL MARKERS)
BEST BEST COLORS is a story which illustrates a typical conundrum for young children: the exclusivity of choosing favorites. As Nate capriciously chooses favorites throughout the story, he is surrounded by a diverse assortment of family and friends. Among the diversities addressed are ethnicity, family structure, and abilities. This diversity is primarily conveyed through the illustrations rather than overtly discussed in the story.

The ethnicities represented in BEST BEST COLORS are African-American, Anglo, Asian-American, and Hispanic. Three of these cultures are represented within the family of the main character, Nate. Nate and Mamma Laura are black, Mamma Jean is Anglo, and Nate’s sister is Asian-American. While none of these ethnicities are discussed in the text, Henriquez uses coloration and facial features to portray non-stereotypical examples of each. Another important facet of this book’s multicultural appeal is the fact that it is bilingual. In fact, the entire series of which it is a part, “Anti-Bias Books for Kids,” has been translated into Spanish.

Hoffman also addresses diversity in family structure. This diversity is alluded to in an unobtrusive manner. Nate refers to his mammas, but not the fact that he has two mammas. Nor is it mentioned that other families might not be the same. The only overt textual reference to gay and lesbian culture is when his mammas are showing Nate a rainbow flag, “Look what we got for the Pride Parade.” Even this reference to gay culture could be overlooked by young readers or older readers who are not well-informed. Another example of diversity in family structure is Nate’s sister, who is most likely adopted. She is seen but not heard. Indeed, the reader is aware of her existence solely because of the illustrations.

Finally, differently-abled diversity is included in BEST BEST COLORS. One of Nate’s friends, Mandy, uses a wheelchair. Again, this representation of a parallel culture is known only because of the illustrations. No mention of her handicap is made in the text. Mandy’s use of a wheelchair is not so much a character development tool, rather it is a detail in the illustrations.

Rather than promote diversity, Eric Hoffman’s primary thrust appears to be helping readers deal with the issue of choosing exclusive favorites. On the other hand, Henriquez’ primary intention is to imbue the story with diversity and multiculturalism. Being part of the “Anti-Bias Books for Kids” series is most likely the rationale behind the plethora of cultures represented in BEST BEST COLORS. However, it is a bit heavy handed. Just as a book about any ethnicity can be overwhelmed by too many cultural references, so too may be a book about diversity and tolerance in general.

REVIEW EXCERPTS
“The engaging story is enhanced by lively full-page illustrations depicting a multicultural cast of interesting characters” (Day, p. 5).
“A ‘Note to Parents, Teachers, and other Caregivers’ at the end of each book suggests follow-up activities and discussion topics. Overall, these purposeful titles meant to encourage readers to think about these issues fall short in the execution of their mission. (Library Journal, 1999)*

*Note: The author of this review, Kristina Aaronson of Bethel Elementary School Library in Vermont, includes examples from three of the four titles in this review of the Anti-Bias Books for Kids series. BEST BEST COLORS is not mentioned.

Day, Frances Ann. 2000. Lesbian and gay voices: An annotated bibliography and guide to literature for children and young adults. Westport, CN : Greenwood Press.

Library Journal review obtained from Amazon.com and accessed at: http://www.amazon.com

CONNECTIONS
Other books in the Anti-Bias Books for Kids series:
PLAY LADY, ISBN 978-1884834615
NO FAIR TO TIGERS, ISBN 978-1884834622
HEROINES AND HEROES, ISBN 978-1884834684

Related website:
A WORLD OF DIFFERENCE® Institute

http://www.adl.org/bibliography/default.asp

Review of THE MAGIC PAINTBRUSH

Yep, Lawrence. 2000. THE MAGIC PAINTBRUSH. New York, NY: Harper Collins. ISBN 9-780-0602-8199-1

PLOT SUMMARY
When Steve’s parents die, he must go to live with his only remaining relative, his grandfather. Steve isn’t sure of which he is more afraid—his grandfather or new neighborhood, Chinatown. Now, the one thing that gives Steve happiness is in jeopardy. Steve loves to paint. But, his brush is old and frayed and his grandfather cannot afford a new one. In a surprising twist, Steve’s grumpy grandfather gives him a paintbrush which is imbued with magical powers. Through this gift, Steve, his grandfather and those around them learn new things about living in Chinatown and what it truly means to be happy.

CRITICAL ANALYSIS (INCLUDING CULTURAL MARKERS)
THE MAGIC PAINTBRUSH uses a common theme as his vehicle for this story about a Chinese-American boy and his grandfather. Through the use of plot, setting, and characterization Lawrence Yep writes a tale in which unexpected—and sometimes unbelievable—events occur as a means of binding this family together and helping them find happiness.

The theme in THE MAGIC PAINT BRUSH is a common one. A boy loses his parents and, therefore, must go to live with a relative whom he does not know. However, this frequently-used theme takes a turn when the grandfather gives Steve a magic brush. Everything he paints becomes real. None of the characters; neither Steve, his grandfather, nor his Uncle Fong are happy with their lives. With this paintbrush they learn to be content with their lives rather than resentful. At first, the magic is predictable and helpful. As the story progresses, the journeys they take with the paintbrush become surreal. This step into the bizarre detracts from the message of the story and the reader’s ability to suspend disbelief.

Yep’s use of characterization is this story’s best quality. Steve is an eight-year-old boy who feels he alone is grieving his parents’ death. His grandfather not only doesn’t seem to mourn their death, he apparently dislikes Steve and resents having to care for him. Steve recalls that his grandfather “never spoke to [him] except to scold him” (p. 2). However, when Steve comes home late from school, the grandfather’s worry surprises him. “You were worried about me?” (p. 7). Slowly, Steve and his grandfather realize they have much in common and differ mainly in the expression of their emotions. This difference is not only generational, but also cultural. Steve was born in the United States while his grandfather was born in China and became a “Chinatowner.”

The setting gives glimpses of several places: Chinatown in San Francisco, a peach orchard in Dragon Back village in China, and Chinatown’s “moon.” Each of these places is distinctly different and shows a different side of Chinese-American culture portrayed in THE MAGIC PAINTBRUSH. To Steve, Chinatown is a scary, foreign neighborhood of dark doorways, dingy apartment buildings and narrow alleyways. Dragon Back, Uncle Fong’s hometown, is a light, airy village surrounded by a fragrant orchard. Dragon Back’s irrigation system, called a water chain, alludes to the time and place which they are visiting. Lastly, a cassia tree, an enchanted rabbit and a small pagoda style building represent the Chinatown moon: a mythical place from the Chinatown story, The Lady on the Moon.

The plot, characters, and setting in THE MAGIC PAINTBRUSH provide a taste of Chinese-American culture, especially as it is in San Francisco’s Chinatown. While the plot twists are somewhat strange, Yep’s characters and use of varied settings give the reader a plethora of details which allow insight to this ancient yet dynamic culture.

REVIEW EXCERPTS
“Ancient popular Chinese myths as well as some more recent urban Chinese legends are woven into this story of modern America. . . . Written at an easy level, this is a great story for the elementary grades” (Multicultural Review)
“Steve learns about his grandfather's past, about Chinese legends, and about life as a "Chinatowner." Through simple yet sensitive dialogue, the author weaves a tale of alienation turning into affection, and of good prevailing over meanness.” (School Library Journal)
“Set in San Francisco's Chinatown, this novel mixes elements of fantasy and fairy tale as an eight-year-old boy gets a paintbrush that transforms his dreary life. "Snappy dialogue, realistic characters and plenty of wise humor keep the pages turning,” (Publisher’s Weekly)

Reviews obtained from Follett Library Resources and accessed at:
http://www.flr.follett.com/search?SID=c211074453f514ff63ced2a0fe154f24
and from Book Review Digest Plus database, courtesy of Texas Woman’s University Library.

CONNECTIONS
Other books by Lawrence Yep:
THE DRAGON PRINCE: A CHINESE BEAUTY & THE BEAST TALE. ISBN 978-0-06-443518-5
COCKROACH COOTIES. ISBN 978-0-7868-1338-4
THE CASE OF THE GOBLIN PEARLS. ISBN 978-0-06-440552-2

Other picture books and young adult novels about Chinese Americans:
Yamate, Sandra S. 2000. CHAR SIU BAO BOY. NY: Polychrome. ISBN 978-1-879965-19-5
Roth, Susan L. 2001. HAPPY BIRTHDAY, MR. KANG. National Geographic Society. ISBN 978-0-7922-7723-1
Yin. 2001. COOLIES. NY: Philomel Books. ISBN 978-0-399-23227-5
Yin. 2006. BROTHERS. NY: Philomel Books. ISBN 978-0-399-23406-4

Review of ALLISON

Say, Allen. 1997. ALLISON. Boston: Houghton Mifflin. ISBN 9-780329-39549-0

PLOT SUMMARY
Allison and her doll, Mei Mei, live happily with her mother and father. One day, Allison notices she doesn’t look like her parents. When she realizes she’s been adopted, she bitterly focuses on the fact that her “real” parents didn’t want her and gave her away. As she broods and acts out, Allison struggles to deal with her anger. Finally, Allison is able to work through her feelings by taking a stray cat into their family.

CRITICAL ANALYSIS (INCLUDING CULTURAL MARKERS)
Allen Say tells an emotional story of a little girl dealing with her family. Through the use of plot, characterization (including voice), language, and illustrations, ALLISON conveys a realistic picture of how a child dealing with adoption might feel.

The story opens with Allison receiving a dress from her grandmother. Her parents “ooh” and “aah” over how pretty she looks wearing her kimono. The mother’s use of the term kimono is Allison’s first clue that there is something different about her. She realizes for the first time how differently she looks from her parents. The inevitable conversation takes place between the child and her adoptive parents, “You’re not my Mommy and Daddy?” she asks. To which her parents reply, “of course we are….” This exchange only serves to deepen Allison’s dismay. Her sadness comes to a climax when she realizes Allison is not her ‘real’ name. This plot shows a realistic journey of a young girl dealing with her identity.

The characters in ALLISON are neither homogenous nor stereotypical. The adoptive parents are hurt by Allison’s outbursts, yet they are patient with their daughter. Allison’s school mates, representing many different ethnicities, reflect varied skin tones, body shapes, and hair styles. Allison, who is adopted from an unspecified Asian country, also exhibits a non-stereotypical view of her ethnicity. Except for the time she is trying on her new kimono, Allison wears typical clothing for an American child.

Say’s use of voice further contributes to the characters’ believability. Allison’s question, “Where did Mei Mei come from?” accurately depicts a child’s tendency to project questions about themselves onto dolls or animals. Later, when Allison is acting out against her mother, she ruins her dolls. Rather than fuss at Allison, the mother laments, “Oh, no, poor [dolly]! I’ve had him since I was a little girl.” This type of response reveals a believable interaction between a mother and daughter which is full of anger and pain yet grounded in love.

The illustrations and use of Japanese words provide a fullness to ALLISON. Say’s ability to capture realization, anger, pain, and defiance in his characters’ faces is outstanding. At the story’s most painful moments, Say uses dark somber colors. At the end, Allison’s breakthrough with the stray cat is accompanied by bright sunlight and pastel background colors. Say tops off the cultural allusion by including words such as Mei Mei (the doll’s name), kimono, and obi.

ALLISON is a touching story about a family dealing with adoption. This realistically portrayed situation is conveyed through the adept use of literary tools and a sensitive yet authentic approach to ethnic diversity.

REVIEW EXCERPTS
“Her adoption of a stray cat brings about a happy ending that seems less earned than bibliotherapeutic. The large, sober paintings are often heavy, and the bookmaking, though handsome, is too big and elegant for the family drama it is meant to support.” (Horn Book)
“Cleverly, Say uses a stray cat that Allison wants to adopt to help her come to terms with her anger as she realizes everyone needs a family. A subtle, sensitive probing of interracial adoption, this exquisitely illustrated story will encourage thoughtful adult-child dialogue on a potentially difficult issue.” (Publishers Weekly)
“Say masterfully captures Allison's expressions: She is surprised, wounded, sullen, hurt and hurtful, and finally reassured. He addresses the dark side of an adoptive child's feelings carefully, and while the resolution is a bit convenient (and may require interpretation for younger children), it still carries truth.” (Kirkus Review)

Reviews obtained from Follett Library Resources and accessed at:
http://www.flr.follett.com

CONNECTIONS
Other books by Allen Say:
THE BICYCLE MAN, ISBN 978-0-395-32254-3
EL CHINO, ISBN 978-0-395-52023-9
EMMA’S RUG, ISBN 978-0-395-74294-5

Other books about adoption:
Lewis, Rose A. 2000. I LOVE YOU LIKE CRAZY CAKES. New York, NY : Little, Brown. ISBN 978-1-59990-017-9
Young, Ed. 2006. MY MEI MEI. New York, NY : Philomel Books. ISBN 978-0-395-74294-5
Friedrich, Molly. 2004. YOU’RE NOT MY REAL MOTHER! New York, NY : Little, Brown. ISBN 978-0-316-60553-3

Related website:
http://www.houghtonmifflinbooks.com/authors/allensay/

Review of JINGLE DANCER

Smith, Cynthia Leitich. Cornelius Van Wright and Ying-Hwa Hu (Ill.) 2000. JINGLE DANCER. New York : Morrow Junior Books. ISBN 978-0-688-162429

PLOT SUMMARY
“Tink, tink, tink, tink,” sang Grandma Wolfe’s dress. Jenna wanted to jingle dance too, but her dress didn’t have any jingles. Jenna visits family and friends trying to collect just enough jingles for her own dress without compromising the voice of the dresses from which she borrowed. JINGLE DANCER is a story of a young Ojibway girl who wishes to dance her first Jingle Dance at a powwow. Though her grandmother agrees she may dance, it will be up to Jenna to give her dress a voice.

CRITICAL ANALYSIS (INCLUDING CULTURAL MARKERS)
JINGLE DANCER offers an authentic reflection of an intertribal community consisting of Muscogee and Ojibway members. The characters, their relationships, and the book’s illustrations are woven together to paint a picture of a contemporary, close-knit neighborhood preparing for a powwow.

Cynthia Smith takes care to create an extended circle in the main character, Jenna’s, life. Jenna lives with Grandma Wolfe in a contemporary home on a tree-lined street. Throughout the course of Jenna’s quest, she visits three different people, each within walking distance. First, she visits her great-aunt to hear a Muscogee/Creek story. Next, Jenna visits a friend whom she helps make fry bread. Finally, Jenna visits her cousin, Elizabeth, whom she helps carry files. Through the recurring use of the phrase “once again,” Smith clearly defines the ongoing close relationships among them.

Though the great-aunt appears to be retired and Jenna’s friend sells fry bread and Indian tacos, their occupations are not explicitly stated. However, the cousin’s career is made clear. Elizabeth “arrives home late from the law firm” and is carrying a brief case and a newspaper titled Law Review under her arm. This overt illustration of Elizabeth’s profession seems a bit overdone. This may be an attempt by the author to counter negative stereotypes.

Through their illustrations, Van Wright and Hu avoid the “monolithic culture” stereotype by giving each character her own distinct look. The women’s faces are unmistakably different. There is also variation in hair color and texture, and, to a lesser degree, skin tone.

Cynthia Smith, herself a member of the Muscogee Nation, supplies an extensive Author’s Note which includes explanations of Muscogee and Ojibway traditions. This note provides background information on traditional stories, jingle dances, and regalia. A glossary is also provided for some terms which might be unfamiliar. Overall, JINGLE DANCER proves to be an authentic and contemporary story of a young girl looking forward to her first jingle dance.

REVIEW EXCERPTS
“[Jenna’s] promise to dance for the women who cannot dance for themselves illustrate the importance of family and community ties.” (Booklist)
“Seeing Jenna as both a modern girl in the suburban homes of her intertribal community and as one of many traditionally costumed participants at the powwow will give some readers a new view of a contemporary Native American way of life.” (School Library Journal)

Reviews obtained from Follett Library Resources and accessed at:
http://www.flr.follett.com/search?SID=c211074453f514ff63ced2a0fe154f24

CONNECTIONS
Other books about the Ojibway/Chippewa:
King, Sandra, and Catherine Whipple. 1993. Shannon: an Ojibway dancer. Minneapolis: Lerner Publications. ISBN 978-0-822596431
Mercredi, Morningstar, and Darren McNally. 1997. Fort Chipewyan homecoming: a journey to native Canada. Minneapolis: Lerner Publications. ISBN 978-0-8225-2659-9
McCain, Becky R., and Stacey Schuett. 1998. Grandmother’s Dreamcatcher. Morton Grove, Ill: A. Whitman ISBN 978-0-807530320

Review of TONING THE SWEEP

Johnson, Angela. 1993. TONING THE SWEEP. New York, NY: Orchard Books. ISBN 978-0-531-086261

PLOT SUMMARY
Emmie and her mother are going to the desert to collect Ola, Emmie’s grandmother. Unlike her annual summer visits to Ola’s house, this time Emmie is helping her move to Cleveland to live with them. Before they leave, Emmie sets out to gather memories for Ola by videotaping her friends and neighbors. Not only does she learn how much her grandmother is loved, but also why her own mother is sometimes so sad and angry. In this slow-moving novel, a young girl helps her mother and grandmother through a process of healing and closure. Author Angela Johnson attempts to reveal how emotional hurt runs as deeply as that of physical ailments in TONING THE SWEEP.

CRITICAL ANALYSIS
TONING THE SWEEP is the story of a 14-year old African-American girl who travels to her grandmother’s house with her mother. The girl, Emmie, has visited Ola, her grandmother, every summer since she was two. This visit, however, is different. Through the use of language, characterization and setting, Angela Johnson writes a story which allows the reader to watch a family deal with life-threatening disease and the loss of loved ones through a uniquely African-American lens.

As the characters talk to one another, their relationships as well as their culture are exposed. “Girl, you’d better put that hat on…” (p. 8). “I hope you never get to see hate, baby” (p. 33). The characters’ concern and love for one another comes through in their dialog. Further, terms of endearment such as baby, girl, honey, and sister are terms often used in African-American culture. Other phrases which connote generational as much as ethnic culture are used throughout the novel. As Emmie practices using the video camera she admits, “guess I’ll get it when I chill a little” (p. 19).

While ethnicity is never an overt topic in TONING THE SWEEP, characterization provides hints throughout the story. The main character, Emmie, has a variety of characteristics. Her grandmother affirms she is a “smart ass”—a typical teenage trait. However, Emmie admits to not having a clue about how to be cool. She thinks to herself that most of her friends wouldn’t admit to liking their grandmothers as she does. Ola is an irreverent and bold character. At one point in the story she tells Emmie, “Hair should be kept at home—not loaned out to people who want to put strange objects and creams in it…when you know your pets will be scared of you when you get back to the house” (p. 44). This statement can be attributed to Ola’s lack of vanity. However, it may also be a rejection of the phenomenon of Black people buying into the White definition of beauty. Ola surrounds herself with good friends such as the aunts. The aunts are described in the story as wild and free. They tell stories, braid hair, and roll on the floor laughing. With Johnson’s description, it is easy to draw a mental picture of these senior African-American sisters.

The dry, seemingly infertile setting of the desert is juxtaposed with the thriving, fertile personalities which inhabit it. While Ola initially wonders what she will be able to grow in “the dry,” it is clear she has nurtured many lush relationships. These relationships helped her to survive losing her husband and growing apart from her daughter. Despite her loses, Ola’s warm and easy relationship with her granddaughter flourishes like kudzu vine in this barren setting.

The language, characterization and setting in TONING THE SWEEP contribute to the plot and cultural relevance of the story. As the characters interact with the setting and one another, the reader senses the familial bonds and culture which Johnson has set forth.

REVIEW EXCERPTS
“Johnson's spare, beautifully written first novel—a thematic extension of Tell Me a Story, Mama (1989)—portrays a crucial turning point for African-American women from three generations.” (Kirkus Reviews)
“PW, in a starred review, praised this “thoughtfully nuanced and penetrating” novel about three generations of women from an African American family who must cope with a beloved grandmother's illness.” (Publisher’s Weekly)
Coretta Scott King Award, 1994

Reviews obtained from Follett Library Resources and accessed at:
http://www.flr.follett.com/main?SID=b8eed00e8fcf7b8bd35cecbbffabda05

CONNECTIONS
Other books by Angela Johnson:
Bird, ISBN 978-0-14-240544-4
The Other Side: Shorter poems, ISBN 978-0-531-07167-0
The First Part Last, ISBN 978-0-689-84923-7
Heaven, ISBN 978-0-689-82229-2

Books by Jacqueline Woodson:
Behind You, ISBN 978-0-14-240390-7
Between Madison and Palmetto, ISBN 978-0-399-23757-7
Locomotion, ISBN 978-0-14-240149-1